I made a video a couple months ago. Care for some feedback?

[Zalno]

I made a quick-post about this a couple months back, but I put a video together in time for Easter this year. Part of this was to learn how to do some editing in Sony Vegas and try to advertise my current skills. But really, I just wanted to make a video where chocolate bunnies get smashed. Some of the footage in this video was recorded by some friends of mine. Everything in my apartment was all me.

Anything you think I should work on in terms of editing, comedic timing, framing,, etc?

 

[zatoseyes]

Anything you think I should work on in terms of editing, comedic timing, framing,, etc?

I'm not a video editing expert by any means, but I watch a lot of YouTube and I think you did great! Liked and subscribed.

 

[Zalno]

I'm not a video editing expert by any means, but I watch a lot of YouTube and I think you did great! Liked and subscribed.

Um, thanks? Don't expect me to upload frequently. I'm still kinda figuring things out. My next video will probably be very different.